All today I've been trying to figure out how to make this an epic ending. Unfortunately, I've been in the same predicament as yesterday and epic would not be anything close to relevant.
The month is all done
It has been sliced through and through
The sun coming down
The silence of the evening
I wish the day were longer
I love it non the less, however, your second line is only 6 syllables. Change "it's" to "it has" and you have got it made!
ReplyDeleteI love you and your slices; all 31 of them!
Mrs. Brown